One of mine for 2008 had been to finish 8 short stories. I managed 7.
Finished the last one today. A fantasy romance called The Misspelled Charm. It turned out to be more enjoyable to write than I expected. And the ending surprised me, not the usual happily ever after but oh so romantic and very happy and fun in its own way.
Despite being 1 short of the goal, I've decided that 7's good enough.
What are my goals for 2009? Start and finish a new novel in 2009. And considering these tough economic times, not surprisingly, I want to get saving, over and above saving for bills, lol.
Hope all of your wishes for the new year come true.
Shereen
www.shereenvedam.com
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thankful
The subject line says it all, pretty much.
That makes 6 for this summer, and 5 all set in one world.
This whole experience of writing in one world has been a learning event. When I first began, I hated having to be confined to write in that one world. So much so, I wrote a story set somewhere else.
Then the first of the 5 short stories set up the world and the main story line that was to play throughout all the other short stories.
Setting the second story in the same world felt restrictive. I wanted the freedom to do my own thing. But I forced myself to do it, albeit on another continent, with the first story's enemy as the main characters. I liked that one because I learned how to build a bridge using stacking stones. That was cool.
The third took me back to the original continent, but with ew characters and well into the conflict set up in the first short story.
The fourth went to a third location, an island on the far side of this world, filled with sorcerers. And I wrote it as a young adult story to help me work through how magic works on this land. As a child, the main character, too, learned how to gain mastery of her magic.
This fifth short story took us back to the first setting on this world, and the bit I chucked, which was set inside a university. I re-used some of the costumes and decorations, and one of the characters reappeared with a walk on part, with the main story revolving around a murder mystery.
The most amazing part of this experience is that throughout the writing of these short stories, I was thinking in the back of my mind, wouldn't it be nice if I could be like some of the fantasy authors I enjoy reading, who write characters that became staples for their stories.
Until this last short story.
I can totally envision a hundred stories with the main and side characters from this one. So, of course, I've been trying to figure out why? Why these two? What makes them different? More enduring? And the answer, I think, is that they're more endearing.
Well, the next short for September isn't supposed to have them in it. But maybe it will. Since I can't seem to shake these two out of my head.
Shereen Vedam
Website
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hopeful
That short story I finished and discovered my hero was a villain, just morphed again.
I'd about finished editing it and was getting ready send it off when I realized I hadn't yet created a one sentence summary for the story for the cover letter.
I have a method for doing this that involves answering the following questions in order to get to the crux of the story - gleaned from a course I took from Lori Wilde on how to come up with a high concept:
Who is the compelling character in the story:
What is his/her misguided belief:
What is his/her desperate desire:
What is the specific situation:
Is there a classic plot involved:
What is the character's fatal flaw:
What is the inciting incident
What is the innovative idea in this story:
Is there irony in the story:
By the time I finished answering these questions and then worked on the 25 word high concept, I realized why the hero in my story was a villain.
It was because I hadn't finished the story!
The end point I'd stopped writing at was the black moment. No wonder it felt so bitter sweet, lol.
So I went back and wrote the ending and discovered how to change a villain into a hero.
It's by helping the character learn and grow and gain insight into his experience, instead of remaining mired in his bitterness. The trick is to ensure this evolves naturally out of all the elements of the story you've written thus far.
So, I'm now off to mail this short story to the first market and pick up the volunteer outfit and ID card for the tall ships coming to town next weekend.
Shereen
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satisfied
Someone on one of my lists who critiqued a short story I’m working on said she had a difficult time figuring out whom to root for in the short story.
I thought about that and realized what I've done in this particular short story was unconsciously write it from the villain's point of view.
Which made me realize that villains and heroes have a lot in common.
Like heroes, villains usually think they're right, are passionate about what they want and often have a tragedy in their past that propels them onward. Some even have friends and can inspire a nation, as this one did in my April short story, tentatively titled The Bridge Builder.
It's been well critiqued and edited now, and I should start to market it soon.
AFTER the retrograde ends :-)
Bad enough having a villain for a hero, without going against the stars in trying to sell it, lol.
Shereen
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amused
Actually, I'm shocked I'm posting now, that I'm finished now.
But yes, short story #3 for 2008 is completed (first draft anyway). This was the second story in the fantasy world I'd made up.
I didn't like it.
I loved it but I didn't like it.
It confused me and I don't think it's a real story. But it's over.
This process reconfirmed my lesson in writing about how it's okay if the first draft stinks. You can make it into something pretty afterwards. I hope. Though with this one, I can't imagine selling.
Mind you, if this one sells, it could be I had no clue what a real story was.
And I do love it - it's like an ugly duckling that's so cute you have to love it even though it sounds funny, looks odd and smells suspicious.
But the main point is, it's finished!
Even that ending took me by surprise. I thought I was in the act two stage and then I stopped and looked at it and thought, hey, wait a minute, I think that's the end!
Go figure. I'm going to let it sit and ferment before starting any major edits. I need some distancing from it.
So, what else happened with me in April?
I'm taking a really good on line course called Deep Editing given by Margie Lawson. It's already helped me improve the opening of the April short story. By the end of May, I'm hoping it will help me salvage this one.
In other news, I got a 'hold' notice for an older flash fiction piece. Don't know if they'll buy it, but at least they liked it enough to ask me to put a hold on it.
I also finaled in a contest - The Sandy. For my first fantasy novel. I had a chance to revise the opening before it went to an editor at TOR for final judgment.
Oh, and I found another author who's writing I like a whole lot. Jim C Hines. I'm reading the first of his books, Goblin Quest. A really funny and engaging fantasy novel. I got the first book from the library but I'm going to buy them all and they'll be going on my keeper shelf. If you like light-hearted, funny fantasy, check him out.
That's it for April. Hope May's short story is easier to write and less confusing.
Shereen
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confused
Jan. was a bust, as I needed to relax after finishing a book. And I'm saving next Dec. to plot out the next novel.
The plan was to build a fantasy world and write a series of short stories in that one world at the rate of one a month.
Good plan, bad execution.
I got distracted by news that there was a new short story market looking for contemporary paranormal romances between 10,000-15,000 words. And I was tempted enough to write one.
Since I'd spent the first part of Feb world building and then plotting out the first fantasy short story, I ended up needing to take some days off work to plot and then write the new short story, especially since it would have to be long - from 40-60 pages.
I got it done! Last night, with a last marathon push to the finish line, I ended up writing 18 pages to take me to the end - total of 48 pages for this short story.
And I really like it. It's a contemporary urban fantasy romance set in Cornwall, UK and I aimed for a gothic tone. It ended up being a heck of a lot of fun to write. I should do more of these again. Later. Not in March, lol.
Oh, with this one, the market I was aiming for was Harlequin Nocturne Bites. You can find the details here:
http://community.eharlequin.com/for
March should take me back to the fantasy world I created and into the first of those short stories. I'm really looking forward to it. Hope the writing for that flows as easily and turns out to be as enjoyable as it was for this short story.
Shereen
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pleased
I was going to do some world building to set up the background for a series of 10 fantasy short stories I’m going to attempt writing this year (at the pace of 1 a month).
My plan is (as usual it's based on reducing my workload) to build one world intricately, and then set all the short stories in it, so I don't have to keep building a new world for each one. Laziness strikes again!
Well, I followed the instructions from http://hollylisle.com/fm/Workshops/maps-w
I'd been trying to do the map for about a week but I was never quite happy with it. It looked too crowded or confusing. I think that's because I didn't devote enough time in one length to the work, since I kept trying to work on it during my lunch hours.
But on Sunday, I devoted all morning to this project.
I must have sketched about 8-10 different versions of worlds, tearing it up after each attempt, 'cause I didn't like it, until I settled on one layout I absolutely loved!
This is slightly different than Holly’s version of coming up with a map. When I first tried her method, I came up with one continent, and I wanted more. So, I decided to just draw the continents and fill in the bits in the middle after. In my case, that worked for me.
So, after I was happy with the shape of the continents and islands, I divided those into bordering lands, and people, and mountain ranges, and started naming places.
I moved on to writing a little about each group of people that inhabited the different regions and islands. Why they were different from each other, what were the states rich in, poor in, what weather plagued them most, what language did they speak, what did they believe in, what did they look like.
And then came the best part. The one I thought would be the hardest to do, was the most fun - doing up a 2000 year time line, at 100 year increments.
The neatest bit was coming up with reasons why continents split and why, who got moved where, who claimed what land and why, how did the split affect neighboring relations. And then there were earthquakes or volcanoes that killed off thousands and how that affected those societies' growth, who benefited, who floundered, and what religion or philosophical beliefs sprang up as a result. It was such a hoot!
This has to be the greatest world building exercise I've ever done.
Now I'm finished this part, I have such a rich background and history of this world, both geographical, historical, philosophical, political, and religious, that I can hardly wait to begin the first short story.
I've got so many ideas floating around in my head - and usually my mind's a blank at this stage of the story development. It's such a cool feeling.
I had put Holly Lisle's workshop as a link on my website because it looked intriguing and useful, now I can attest that it really works!
Shereen
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pleased
